2017年9月30日 雅思真題回忆分析IELTS
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2017年9月30日 雅思真题回忆分析 IELTS
作为合格的烤鸭,怎么也得先看一手雅思回忆吧(滑稽)
话说有烤鸭在群里分享一大奇观
这既不是阿呆又来了,也不是全黑赢了什么比赛,而是排队屠鸭现场
这是真·千军万马上战场
A类小作文确实是表格哦
雅思A类大作文是一段时间不见了的青少年犯罪+教育相关
The best way to reduce crimes by young people is by teaching parents good parenting skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
这与曾经的一个题目张得是有点像
Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers?
看一下别人怎么写这个题目的
It appears that the youth crime rate in the modern world is increasing at an alarming rate. Although there may be many factors causing this issue, it is perceivable that the absence of suitable education provided by parents and teachers are the major problems behind this circumstance. This position will thus be analysed in the following paragraphs, supported by relevant examples.
Firstly, parents’ increasing occupational commitments have limited their opportunities to educate children on moral qualities. The current economic condition of the contemporary society requires parents to spend more time at work. This has consequently created fewer interactions between children and parents, precluding youngsters from learning basic emotional aspects such as love and affection from adults. An exemplary case can be seen from my cousin, who barely gets a chance to learn about a specific manner to talk to strangers or elderly people. Hence, it seems that such reality has disabled him to possess an ethical mindset, which might cause behavioural problems outside the home in the future.
Secondly, the modern education system enforces students to obtain tangible achievements, rather than ethical perspectives. For instance, there was a girl in my high school who performed well academically. Although she frequently offended other classmates’ feelings with foul words, she was continuously favoured by teachers because of her good grades. It is personally felt that such an inappropriate teaching motives of the teachers have left many students to focus on achieving material accomplishments, regardless of how badly one behaves.
In conclusion, the two aforementioned ideas clearly encapsulate how the lack of solid and ethical supervisions by adults leaves children to develop problematic thoughts and behaviour.
雅思G类大作文则是这个
Cars should be banned in the centre of large cities. Do you agree or disagree?
我们还要感谢无私奉献的烤鸭们
至于近期口语的热门话题
看一下最近口语Part 3总结咯
最新的小伙伴雅思报捷啦!~~
已经更新啦~ 恭喜上榜
围观一下4个7的童鞋,分手快乐!
屠鸭、注册又加薪,妥妥人生赢家
厉害了,一次考过
如果不知道是学生们讨论,还以为是硬广
一次过6.5,却有别样的烦恼
活捉一枚成功考得8分的预测粉丝
厉害了我的烤鸭和老师们!恭喜恭喜!!
而更多的烤鸭高(fen)分(shou)榜可以在这里↓找到
不然晚了想报都报都没有了
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